Monday, January 31, 2011

Deleted Scenes--Captain Bailey Left in Charge

 You're about to read a portion of one of the earliest versions of the Wounded Spirits. The writing style makes me smile (and cringe!). Captain Dixon Bailey's POV was one of those that was chopped early on. But this scene gives a further glimpse into the fort during the height of the battle. The facts surrounding it were taken from Pickett's "History of Alabama."

Another portrayal of the Fort Mims Massacre
Captain Dixon Bailey Tries to Go for Help

Only a fraction of the fort remained in American hands.  The dead and dying demanded retribution, yet with each minute that passed Captain Dixon Bailey was more certain that there would be none, at least not today, not under his command. 
With the death of Major Beasley, all eyes had immediately and unquestioningly turned to Dixon.  For the past three hours, he had urged the people to continue fighting, he told them that the force of Indian attack was its greatest at the beginning, and they would soon tire and resort to plundering.  A small glimmer of hope had lit the eyes of the surviving soldiers and settlers when ten minutes earlier, hordes of Creeks had ceased fighting to loot the cabins and tents now under their control.  
They had left the fort, arms laden only to return a very short time later.  Red Eagle, like the master warrior he was, corralled them toward the front of the battle and inciting them to continue fighting.  They returned with renewed vigor and hit the Americans with a force not previously felt.
A sudden sense of urgency compelled Bailey to seek extreme measures.  “We need a man to run to Fort Pierce.  It’s just two miles.  Who will go for help?”  Bailey hollered to those few at his side using one of the last cabins in American hands as shelter from which to shoot.  No one answered the call.  “Come, men, someone must go!  We’ll cover you.”
Someone finally spoke up.  “It’s suicide, Captain!  Not a one of us would get through.  We’d do better to stay and fight.” 
“We’ll all die unless we get reinforcements.  We can’t hold out another hour!”  Bailey let off another round.  A warrior running toward him wrenched to the side and fell dead.
“I’d rather die, here at your side that out there among those heathens!” 
Feeling an utter sense of loss, Dixon took the final step.  “Fine, then I’ll go.  Cover me!”  He bolted for the door, throwing it open.  Three sets of hands pulled him back and slammed the door in place as arrows whizzed into it.
“There’s no way we’re letting you go, Captain.”
“Get your hands off of me, Daniel.  I’m going and that’s final!” Dixon swung out at his brother, landing a punch on the jaw.
“Dad blast-it, Dixon!”  Daniel shook his head but kept Dixon pinned to the ground.  “We don’t have time for this.  Get back to shooting.  You wouldn’t make it out of the fort alive, and you know it!”
Dixon took a steadying breath.  “Give me my rifle.”
Jesse complied.  “I got an idea, Dixon.  How about me and Daniel go up to the Mims’ roof, cut a few holes and shoot from there.  I bet we can knock out quite a few of them from up there.”
“Good idea.  We’ll cover you.”  Dixson grabbed Jesse by the shoulder stopping him before he walked out.  “Tell those in the house to search for anything they can use as a weapon.  Send out all able-bodied men and boys and any woman that can re-load a gun.”
Jesse nodded soberly, smacked Dixon on the back and left the house at a run.
Dixon’s two brothers scampered their way to the main building, ducking behind anything suitable as cover.  He breathed a little easier when the door to the Mim’s house shut firmly behind them.

Friday, January 28, 2011

The Next COTT Winner!

Hot Off The Presses!


A new COTT winner has been revealed!

(Drum roll, please)...........

And the winner is...........

Tina Pinson!  Woo Hoo!  Yeah!  Way to go!

Tina's excerpt from her book In the Manor of the Ghost, beat out her competitor (DeAnna Julie Dodson's In Honor Bound) with a 56% to 44% vote.  Such close results tell us ya can't go wrong with either title, but Tina's did indeed "take the cake".  Congratulations are in order to the newest Conqueror at Clash of the Titles.  Hip-hip, hooray!  Hip-hip, hooray!

Tina competed in the category of Most Gut-Wrenching Scene with a heart-twisting look at a woman watching her husband and baby trapped in a burning building:

Jean Marc stood in the upstairs window holding a bundle. Kaitlin knew, with another slice to her soul, the bundle was Simone. Jean Marc, so quiet, protective, so uneasily riled, yelled. Tormented wails for help rose along with tears of anguish and fear as angry flames licked out behind him.

For the full excerpt, click HERE

A few of our reader/voters' comments:

    * This would be my worst nightmare!
    * Wonderful writing!
    * Both excerpts were really gut wrenching and had me in tears.

So what did she think of her visit to COTT?  In her words:

"Thanks for letting me do battle here. Not quite so bloody as other arenas. I was honored to be a warrior on Clash. I loved the excerpt from my opponent."

Like those before her, Tina exhibits the graciousness and sportsmanship that has come to define the COTT family.   She fits right in.  And that's something she hasn't always known.  Growing up Tina was one of five siblings—the only blonde.  Though her sisters often joked that she must have been adopted (all in fun), there's no teasing here.

You can read more about Tina in her interview on Clash of the Titles HERE:

About her book:

***
In the Manor of the Ghost:

It's the 1870's. The Civil War has long since been fought and laid to rest, settlers are still joining the wagon trains and heading west to the New Eden. The land is changing. But those who dwell in Clayborne Manor seem trapped in time.
Trapped amid the whispers of failure and sorrow, whispers of longing and defeat. Kaitlin hears them clearly at night. But who haunts Clayborne Manor? The ghost that restlessly walks the halls in the night? Or the ones that plague the minds and spirits of those residing there? Though not inclined to believe the dead can walk the night laden corridors, Kaitlin can see them clearly in the eyes of her husband Devlin, and hear them in the deafening silence of her son, Derrick.
Does she have the courage to search the past and face the ghosts? Does she have the faith to stay and direct all those who dwell In the Manor of the Ghost to the one who sets the captive free?
***
Find out more about Tina and her novel at TinaPinson.com

COTT's next Clash begins Monday with Romantic Moments.  Head over there to vote and enter the free book drawing.  Get ready to swoon!

Article by Michelle Massaro, COTT Assistant Editor.

Thursday, January 27, 2011

Pix from the Site of Fort Mims

As I have time, I plan to share with  my readers some of the photos I've taken during my research trips of the various sites mentioned in Wounded Spirits.

Many of the pictures are on our old computer which requires the master's touch to work properly. Unfortunately, "the master" is deployed at the moment. Until he gets home, I'll share the few pix I have on my netbook.

I stood at the shore ofTensaw Lake to take the picture on the right. It's still called a lake but it's been many years since the small lake turned into a narrow river. This was the "boat yard docks" Hester escaped from and where Zachariah hid while waiting for the Red Sticks to clear the area. River cane as tall as a man used to grow in dense forests along Alabama rivers. The Creek often used it to escape their enemies. Only a tiny fraction remains.

Below are two excerpts from Pickett's History of Alabama, and the chapter entitled "Terrible Massacre at Fort Mims."

"Dr. Holmes, Captain Bailey, and a negro woman named Hester, the property of Benjamin Steadham, were the first to escape through the aperture....Hester received a severe wound in the breast, but reached a canoe in the lake, paddled to Fort Stoddart that night, and was the first to give intelligence to General Claiborne of the horrible affair."

Reproduction of the picket surrounding the fort
"About ten o'clock on the day of the massacre McGirth entered a boat with two of his negroes, and went out of Lake Tensaw into the Alabama, with the view of ascending that river to his plantation, which was situated below Claiborne, for some provisions. Reaching the Cut Off he heard a heavy discharge of guns at Fort Mims. With pain and anxiety he continued to listen to the firing, and running his boat a mile down the river, in a small bayou, resolved to remain there, being firmly impressed with the belief that the Indians had attacked the fort. Late in the evening the firing ceased, and presently he saw clouds of black smoke rise above the forest trees, which was succeeded by flames. The unhappy McGirth now well knew that all was lost, and that in all probability his family had perished in the flames. Being a bold man, like his father, he resolved to go through the swamp with his negroes to the fatal spot. When he came within a quarter of a mile of the fort he placed the negroes in a concealed place, and approached alone."

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

An Interview with Lynn Dove – author of the “Wounded Trilogy”

Heal The Wounded
To celebrate the launch of Heal the Wounded, Lynn will be hosting a contest on January 25th on her blog, Journey Thoughts http://lynndove.wordpress.com/ Once there, just click on the picture for details!


 Tell me something about yourself.
I am a Christ-follower, a wife, a mom, a soon-to be grandmother, a teacher and a writer (in that order).  I wear so many different “hats” that I find prioritizing them tends to focus me better.  I have been married to my best friend, Charles for 32 years and we have three wonderful children: daughter, Laurelle (husband, Matt) are expecting our first grand baby in February, and we have two live-at-home teenagers, Brett and Carmen.   I have been a teacher most of my adult life, and I still substitute from time to time at the private Christian school my teenagers attend.  I love volunteering and working closely with the youth in our church as well.  Lastly, when I’m not writing, I’m reading.   I love to blog and when I’m not blogging, I’m working on my next book.

 Do you have a life verse that you have claimed and why is it so meaningful to you?
My husband, Charles and I have claimed this life verse: “In his heart a man plans his course, but the Lord determines his steps.”  Proverbs 16:9  Through our nearly 32 years of marriage, this verse has sustained us through all the ups and downs of life knowing we may make our plans but God is always in control… AND He allows U-turns!

What led you to write your “Wounded Trilogy” books?  Why did you target youth with these books?
Having been an educator for over thirty years, and I discovered that there are still very few good contemporary Christian books for a young adult audience.
Youth today are under such a spiritual attack from the enemy.  He wants to destroy their spirit and he does it subtly by surrounding them with worldly messages that make them question their looks, their intelligence, as well as their hope for tomorrow.  I wanted to write books that deal with relevant themes, but with a definitive Christian message running throughout: the hope in Jesus Christ. 
I also wanted my young readers to know that everyone makes mistakes; Christians are not excluded from that.  Scripture teaches us to “love one another” even when they make mistakes, however our actions speak louder than our words at times.  I have seen wonderful young people crumble from the constant barrage of cyberspace bullying, malicious gossip and innuendo.  Insensitive words and blatant lies can lead to deep emotional scarring sometimes with tragic consequences.  My books deal with gritty topics such as “cutting”, bullying, gossip, family violence and cancer.  We are not excluded from tough situations just because we are Christians, on the contrary it is exactly in those tough times that God comes alongside us and helps us.  I want my young readers to understand that they are never alone; God is their ever present comfort and strength in everything they are going through.

Could you tell us a little bit about your books?
Shoot the Wounded, the first book of the Wounded Trilogy, is written for youth and young adults. It addresses how lies and gossip destroy a person's spirit and speaks to the heart of relevant themes such as bullying, teen pregnancy and family violence.  The story points the characters, and ultimately the reader, to hope in Jesus Christ.  STW was a finalist in the 2010 Readers Favorite Book Awards.
Heal the Wounded, is the much-anticipated sequel to STW and the second book of the Wounded Trilogy.  HTW delves even deeper into the real world of teenagers trying to live out their faith in the midst of upset and struggle.   Heal the Wounded, continues to follow the characters, Jake, Leigh, Mike (Jake's best friend), and Tim (Ronnie's brother) each of them dealing with the aftermath of their friend’s death in the first book. Jake is especially dealing with a variety of disappointments (“Job” experiences I call them) that cause him to question why God allows bad things to happen to good people. A new character is introduced into the story, Cassidy, a young cancer patient whose unquenchable spirit and faith impacts Jake, Leigh, Mike and Tim in a way that allows them all to experience God's grace and the power of His healing in each one of their lives.
Both STW and HTW have been selected as helpful resources on the world’s largest anti-bullying website: www.bullying.org

I hope to have Love the Wounded, the final book in the trilogy published next year.  I am also writing an autobiographical account about my experiences and personal battle with breast cancer, and I am working on putting that book proposal together to submit to prospective publishers next year.

What advice would you give to young writers who are thinking about becoming published authors?
I have been asked often to give advice to young writers and truly the best advice I could give is this:
Write!
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I believe everyone has a story inside of them.  As a teacher, I encourage my students to write poetry, journal, write short stories and novellas.  The more one writes, the more you improve and polish your craft.  Write about things that appeal to you, write from the heart and write from experience.  Much of my writing is based on my personal experiences and I believe God allows us to go through these experiences for a reason.  Writing allows us the opportunity to share our life lessons with others.  If God has called you to write…just WRITE!
I actually wrote Shoot the Wounded well over ten years ago.  It started out as a short story and after I had written one hundred pages I knew I couldn’t consider it a “short” story any longer.  Then the manuscript literally (hahaha) took up space on the hard drive of my computer for ten years.  I was diagnosed with breast cancer in 2001 and battled the disease for two years.  My family and I experienced God profoundly through that time and certainly to many I am considered a “survivor” today but I hope I have done much more than survive, I hope I have “thrived”! 
I wanted to share part of that experience with my readers, so in Heal the Wounded, the main character’s mom is going through breast cancer and I write about how a family copes with that in the book.
The next piece of advice to young writers is:
Read!
I don’t think it is possible to be a writer if you don’t like to read.  I read all genres and because I write primarily for young adults and teens I try to read all the books that they may be interested in.
 
Do you have any publishing and/or marketing advice for new writers? 
I am still a “rookie” for all intents and purposes when it comes to publishing and marketing a book.  For me, I find that writing a book is a relatively simple thing, but marketing a book can be extremely challenging, time-consuming, occasionally frustrating and discouraging.  I have learned over this year to network with other authors, especially Christian authors who have experience with publishing, and those like me who are new to it.  Some online social networking sites have given me the opportunity to meet some wonderful writers and authors who have been more than willing to share their expertise, their successes and failures with me.  I have learned that book signings can be fun, only if you go into them with the attitude that you might not sell one book, but you’ll meet lots of interesting people. 
One thing I would tell new authors is to not feel shy about purposefully promoting yourself in the marketplace.  I think that was one of the hardest things for me to do initially.  As Christians, we value a humble attitude, but as authors the louder and bolder we are in promoting ourselves to our readers the more books they will buy and read.  Some self-published or POD (print on demand) authors are quite content to write for a select audience, family and friends, but for those of us who want to reach a larger, more world-wide audience, we need to be prepared to create a “buzz” about the book.  The only way to do that is to get people talking about it.  Word of mouth is huge! 
That said, I think it is also important to ask yourself the questions ahead of time about what your personal goals are with publishing a book.  I applaud my publisher, Word Alive Press for asking some pointed questions up front in their publishing questionnaire.  One question in particular prompted me to prayerfully consider my personal goals: “What is the one thing, (the most important thing) you would like to accomplish with your manuscript (book)?”  I remember I wrote, “My hope is that teenagers and young adults who read this book will be touched by the message in the story and ultimately that this book and any others I write will bring Glory to God.”
 
Readers may also connect with Lynn on Twitter, Facebook and on her website: www.shootthewounded.org

About Lynn:
Lynn Dove is a graduate of the University of Calgary, where she earned her Bachelor of Education degree in 1981, she has spent the last thirty years teaching children in the private and public school settings.  In 2007, she earned a Masters of Religious Education degree from the Canadian Southern Baptist Seminary, in Cochrane, Alberta, Canada.

Monday, January 24, 2011

Deleted Scenes--Nokose Finds the Man in His Dreams

It's Monday and time for another deleted scene. This particular one, again deals with Nokose and his drive for blood revenge. The Creek believed that in order for your murdered family member's spirits to find rest, their murderer must be put to death. It was the family member's/clan's responsibility to ascertain this was done.

Nokose believes this to be the reason for his nightmares. His responsibility has weighed heavily on his mind for years, but finally, he gets his chance to do what he believes to be the right thing.

From a historic stand-point, this is the council that brings the Choctaw (ancient enemy of the Creek) to join American forces during the Creek War. In the final copy of Wounded Spirits, we see the results of this as Totka's Red Stick village runs from approaching Choctaw warriors.

The council as it is described below, including Pushmatahaw's speech, is taken straight from history.

Choctaw Chief Pushmatahaw
Nokose Finds the Man in his Dreams

Kooncheto, Choctaw Nation
This mass of humanity drawn together for a purpose, the electric quality of the atmosphere surrounding hundreds of warriors—to Nokose, it all had a remarkably similar tone to another council not many months past. But there were two striking differences.
These were not his people. They were Choctaw, and they had gathered for a purpose exactly opposite the Great Council Meeting of 1811 when Tecumseh had given his fiery speech denouncing the whites. That meeting had been the start of the war.
This meeting might well be the beginning of the end of it.
Nokose wiped the cold, October rain from his face and shouldered his way through the pressing throng, in search of a position near the front. He glanced behind him to make sure Chafigi, his young translator, kept pace with him.
Feeling as if there might be an omniscient, caring God after all, Nokose had leapt at the chance to volunteer as a Creek spy at the upcoming council. And now, here he was, in the heart of the Choctaw Nation, waiting to hear Chief Pushmatahaw’s words.
Thunder rumbled in the distance as a brisk westerly wind pushed a block of storm clouds toward them. Ezekiel Cummings, Ezekiel Cummings. The name ran through Nokose’s mind like frothy water through the treacherous shoals of the Tennessee River
Finally able to put a name to the face tormenting his dreams, he repeated it to himself while skimming the crowd in the day’s waning light. He longed for a glimpse of the man whose face had grown so familiar.
He tried to imagine what the man must look like now, over twenty years later. He must not have changed too much for Galena to recognize him. She’d only seen him once, after all.
A smile twisted Nokose’s lips as he remembered her motherly concern after witnessing his reaction to bumping into the man shortly after his parents’ death.
In a rage, he had assaulted him, a man three times Nokose’s own size. Like a bothersome dog, he had been kicked aside. He had been just a boy, but today he would not be brushed aside so easily.
Silence washed over the throng as Pushmatahaw stood in the center of the council square. George Gaines was seated just to the side.
Dread sank to the pit of Nokose’s stomach as he took in the Choctaw leader. The man wore a suit of blue United States issue regimentals. Gold epaulettes fringed the shoulders. There was no question where his allegiance lay. He stood, hands clasped behind his back, mouth tipped down at the corners.
After a dignified pause, he began. “You know Tecumseh. He is a bad man. He came through our nation, but did not turn our heads.”
Chafigi discreetly translated into Nokose’s ear. “He went among the Muscogee and got many of them to join him.
“You know the Tensaw people. They were our friends. They played ball with us. They sheltered and fed us whenever we went to Pensacola.”
His voice rose. “Where are they now? Their bodies rot at Sam Mims’ place. The people at St. Stephens are our friends. The Muscogee intend to kill them too. The whites want soldiers to defend them.”
Drawing out his sword, he brandished it, cutting through the rain with the polished edge. “You can do as you please. You are all freemen. I dictate to none of you. But I shall join the St. Stephens people. If you have a mind to follow me, I will lead you to glory and to victory!”
Lightning split the sky and reflected off the weapon he still held aloft. A brief moment of utter stillness passed. Then, a young warrior stepped forward and slapped his hand against his breast.
“I am a man. I am a man! I will follow you!” Thunder crashed overhead, competing with a shout of approval from the mass. The sound reverberated in Nokose’s chest and rattled his nerves.
The elation transforming Gaines’ face contrasted with the gloom sweeping through Nokose. His sweet children’s portentous fate had just been pronounced. The thought filled him with the desire to run home and shield them from danger.
He swiveled on his heel to leave, but an abrupt movement in the center of the square caught his eye. A man approached and leaned to speak in Gaines’ ear.
Nokose squinted through the dusk, hoping to bring the man’s features into focus. Is it him? Ezekiel Cummings, Ezekiel Cummings…
Scraggly white hair sprayed from beneath the man’s tri-corn hat. The wrinkles lining his hardened face and several days’ growth of beard could not hide his identity. Nokose would recognize those heartless gray eyes on the darkest of nights.
As his heartbeat quickened, the world around him slowed and dissolved. There were now only two people in it—him and Ezekiel Cummings.

***
Struggling against the flow of men, Nokose Fixico grunted and pushed against the masses. Chafigi had been sent in the opposite direction towards Tuckabatchee with the message the Choctaw had joined the Americans.

He knew the route Cummins would take, and he knew what information the man would disclose to the eager ears of the white chiefs. Another reason to kill the man.
Nokose smirked. A delay in enemy communication could only help the Red Stick cause. If he had needed more justification to kill Cummins, Nokose had it. The shifty-eyed scout deserved to die, to suffer then crave the freedom death would bring. But Nokose would have no time for such today.
He broke free of the binding crowd and sprinted toward his pony, heedless of the pelting rain. He leapt onto the animal’s back and spun toward the tree-studded rise to the east.
A well-traveled path wound its way around the base of the crag, but Nokose would not be using it. Fingers buried in his horse’s mane, he prodded the pony’s ribs with his heels, urging the animal into the shadowy woodland.
The beast’s sides heaved as his sturdy legs propelled him up the steep incline. Not satisfied with their progress, Nokose broke off a length of passing tree branch and switched the animal’s hindquarters. Ears flat and eyes bulging, the pony increased its tempo.
The ground blurred beneath his feet. Vegetation whipped at his face.
Nokose had one chance to get this right. He would not miss it. The spirits had gifted him retribution, and he would make use of it if he killed his pony doing so.
Before long, Nokose spied the peak.
Now to find the bluff.
Yesterday, while entering Kooncheto, he had traveled the path below. The image of an overhang played in his memory. He swept keen eyes over the terrain.
There. Just as he remembered—a young pine and a boulder with a diagonal crevice.
Nokose pulled the pony to a fast stop. His moccasin feet landed without a sound. He crept toward the boulder. Blood hammered in his ear, as he wondered whether he was too late. Had the scout already passed by?
Willing his breathing to steady and his heart to slow, he listened. The wind whistled through the pine needles above. A bird renewed its song.
Then, in the distance, he heard it. The rhythmic trot of hoof against packed dirt. It made his heart thud faster.
Belly against rock, he slithered to the precipice. The path lay no more than twelve feet below. It was perfect.
Knife in hand, he waited.
The sound of hoof beats grew louder. Eyes riveted to the bend in the path just ahead, Nokose planned his next moves. Just moments passed before the horse and rider made the bend.
A soiled, floppy hat hid the man’s face from view.
Tilt your head. Give me a look of your face. There were just seconds now before Nokose should be in the air. Let me see you!
Desperate, Nokose threw a stone against a tree just up the road. It worked.
The leather brim lifted as the man jolted at the sound. Nokose launched himself into the air with a shriek.
He landed square on Cummins’ back and tumbled with him to the ground. The man’s horse darted off, but not before one of his hooves hit Nokose’s chest.
He lost his breath with the blinding pain. He rolled onto his side, trying to pull himself together.
Cummins scrambled to his feet and thrust a toe under Nokose’ shoulder. He flipped him onto his back then pinned him to the ground with his weight. “Who are you?”
Nokose kicked to free himself.
A dizzying punch snapped Nokose’ head to the side. He ground his teeth against the pain. “The son of murdered parents and the one who brings your death.”
Cummins squeezed his knees into Nokose’ chest in a torturous crush. The world spun, yet he refused to cry out.
Cummins let loose a mocking laugh. “Change of plans.”
The glint of metal caught Nokose’ eye. In a frantic move, he lunged to the side sparing his neck but sacrificing his shoulder to the man’s blade. With a crazed cry, he summoned twenty years of hate and threw Cummins off him.
Ignoring the pain screaming through him, Nokose pummeled Cummins’s face until the older man’s eyes rolled back into his head, and he seemed about to lose consciousness. Nokose pulled back wanting Cummins to know who had killed him and why.
“Cummins!” Nokose grabbed him by the jaw and jostled his head to bring him around. When his lids opened, their eyes met. “The blood of my mother and father, the blood you spilled, cries from the ground. For these many years, their blood has demanded satisfaction, and today it will be given.”
Cummins opened his mouth to reply, but Nokose was too swift. With the crunch of blade against bone, he sank his knife into Cummins’ heart. In one swift move, he extracted it from his chest and ran it in a tight circle around his crown.
Scalp in hand, Nokose let the lifeless head fall to the ground. Standing and straddling the dead man, Nokose lifted the dripping trophy into the air and let out a screech of victory.
Now he could sleep in peace. Now Cummin’s face would no longer disturb his dreams--his life. Now the spirits of his family would find rest.
Blood revenge had been exacted. The peace his soul longed for, but feared it would never have, would find him at last.

Friday, January 21, 2011

What Others are Saying about Wounded Spirits


Today, I proclaim myself a new mom, showing off her darling infant. Please indulge me as I share with you some of the rave reviews Wounded Spirits received during yesterday's First Wild Card Blog Tour. My baby didn't receive a single negative review, and I'm terribly relieved! But also very grateful for those who took the time to read the book and share their thoughts. Thank you, ladies!

April Elstrom
http://homeschoolblogger.com/elcloud/784713/
I really enjoyed Wounded Spirits.  It was an impressive first novel by April Gardner.  The storyline had a few twists that were predictable, but just as many that were unexpected. To be honest, I realized I didn’t know much about the relations between settlers and the Native Americans in the  states of the southeast. It left me wanting to read more about the history of that area, especially after I read April’s closing notes which showed how many of the people in her story were real people from history rather than fictional characters.
I look forward to reading more books from April Gardner.


Brenda Casto from WV Stitcher
http://kittycrochettwo.blogspot.com/2011/01/first-wild-card-tour-wounded-spirits-by.html
I love reading historical fiction, it always makes me feel as if I am getting a history lesson while reading a great fiction story,and with Wounded Spirits, thats exactly what I got. The author does a fantastic job of weaving a great fiction tale around the truths of history. The characters are so well developed that it is easy to believe the story that unfolds.While faith in God is mentioned often in the story, it isn't overdone,instead seeming very appropriate for the characters.
A story that captured my imagination,with characters that stayed in my heart and mind long after the last page. I can't wait to read the next book in the series to see what life has in store for Adela!

On a scale of 1 to 5 I would give this book a six, because its just that good!!!

Martha Artyomenko
http://homeschoolblogger.com/martha/783643/
This story was a hard story to read. It was a part of history that was very sad, written in a fictional tale of a family. This family was torn apart by extreme pain and suffering. I found that I could understand how the characters felt, even though their responses were very different.
I just wished that the story went on just a bit longer to find out what happened later. For a debut book, I think this was a story that is very different than what is out there about western and Indian history and was a good way to start some good discussions in anyone’s reading time-Martha

Life in Review—Michelle Vasquez
http://michellevsblog.blogspot.com/2011/01/first-wild-card-tour-for-wounded.html
I think Wounded Spirits is a wonderful debut novel for April Gardner! I really liked the era and thought the story was beautiful! It is rich with historical detail. And the characters are just fabulous.

You know I don't ever give away plot details so I will be very vague, but the story takes place in 1813 in the Southeastern United States. Tensions are becoming high between the Creek indians and the American colonists living there. They thought they had begun living at peace but things are beginning to go terribly wrong.

In this beautiful story, the author takes us into both worlds where we get to know families in both the Creek world, and then among the colonists as well. We get to see both sides of the story as we follow these families. It is heart-wrenching at times. It is beautiful and very touching.

I very highly recommend this book. It's well written, full of suspense, drama, romance, and a powerful message. It will hook you from the start and keep you hooked to the end. I look forward to seeing what's next from April Gardner!

Thank you to April Gardner for providing me with a review copy of this book!

Reviews by Molly (Edwards)
http://reviewsbymolly.blogspot.com/2011/01/first-wildcard-tour-wounded-spirits-by.html
April Gardner's debut is absolutely wonderful! While I admit, I had a bit of trouble getting past the beginning until I saw where all the Indians were going to fit in, but that was a short lived problem. Once I got further into the story, it all cam together PERFECTLY!

It was interesting to read this debut, as it was centered around TWO wars. One being a historically real war between Indians and soldiers, and the other being 3 souls battling an inner war of conflict, heartache and fully trusting in God to overcome the struggles. While written to be fiction, Gardner's rich detail to a time in history that was utterly tragic,filled with slaves and lots of warring action, was fantastic. Every mention of plantations, Indian villages and soldiers brought me deeper into the plot, as if I was a part of the story, running for my life and trying to stay alive.

April Gardner's characters are ALL so meaningful that I can't say that just one is my favorite. Each one went through a struggle that I wish I could have helped them with, yet they all blended together in a storyline that felt absolutely real, like 2011 turned to 1800s!

Though I didn't want to say goodbye to the characters yet, I know that Gardner has another one on the way that will pick up where this start left off. I highly, highly recommend this captivating story with 5 star praises. You'll become a part of history and the raging battles of war first hand. You'll quickly find yourself praying for all the amazing, tender characters like they were your family. If you love history, if you love reading about a time of war, then this start to a fantastic series is the perfect place to turn!

Black ‘n Gold Girl’s Book Spot –Renee Chaw
http://steelergirl83.blogspot.com/2011/01/first-wild-card-blog-tour-my-review_20.html
Be on the lookout for all the great new names in fiction this year including April Gardner. The setting and *sigh* worthy romance reminded me very much of one of my favorite Christian fiction authors, Laura Frantz. I love historical fiction but a lot of it tends to be set during the Civil War or shortly thereafter in the Western frontier towns. This book set in Creek Country during the Creek War is such a refreshing change, it makes the historian in me want to go out and research, research, research! Finally a topic that I haven't read about over and over again.

Of course by now you're wondering about the romance, well it certainly Sizzles (yes that's sizzles with a capital "s"). I was a little unsure of where Adela's relationship with Phillip was headed but by the end of the book I had that "aha" moment. I'm sure we will be seeing more of Phillip in the future but I can't say whether or not that will be a good thing but it will certainly make things interesting! Let me also just say if you're like me and enjoy a book with a forbidden romance, you're in luck. Sorry to tease but I'm not telling you who is involved in this relationship, you'll just have to read Wounded Spirits to find out! Hint: One of these people is not the aforementioned Phillip! ;-)

Are you intrigued? I hope so. This is a great inspirational romance and I definitely hope to read Book 2, Warring Spirits in the future!

Mocha with Linda (Attaway)
http://mochawithlinda.blogspot.com/2011/01/wounded-spirits.html
This is a solid debut novel. What a difficult time this was in our nation's early history as settlers and Native Americans warred with one another over property. It was a fearful, often bloody time. Yet beneath the rancor of both sides were individuals who were very much alike in many ways, seeking to do what they felt was best for their family and searching for meaning to life. Courage and determination mix with faith and love in this story based on actual people and circumstances.

Cathy Stephen’s Blog
http://tckk.blogspot.com/2011/01/wounded-spirits-by-april-w-gardner.html
I really enjoyed this glimpse into the life of the Creek Indians and frontier life in the early 1800's. Adela was a very independent girl and she loved the Lord and desired to do the right things in her life. It was interesting to read how these particular Indians and whites felt about each other and how and why they each battled the other. Very interesting History lesson and a good look into relationships. I recommend reading this book.



Thursday, January 20, 2011

Wounded Spirits is featured on First Wild Card Tours today!

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books.  A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured.  The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between!  Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:

Vinspire Publishing (November 1, 2010)
***Special thanks to April Gardner for sending me a review copy.***

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:


April W Gardner is a military wife who has practiced the art of homemaking all over the world. She spends her mornings homeschooling her two darling children, and her afternoons inside the minds of her characters. In no particular order, she dreams of owning a horse, traveling the nation in an RV, and learning Italian. April is involved in the music ministry of her church and volunteers in their library. She currently lives in the heart of ancient Creek Country—Middle Georgia.

This is her first novel.

Visit the author's website.

SHORT BOOK DISCRIPTION:

On the frontier, Adela McGirth’s life is simple, rugged, and exactly to her liking. Her greatest concern is whether to marry the settlement’s most eligible young officer. When a distant war among the Natives spills over into a nearby skirmish, life takes a perilous turn. Deep in enemy territory Adela must choose between the man she loves and a baby that has yet to be born; will she be strong enough to wait on God's provision?

A peace-loving yet loyal Creek warrior, Totka is forced to align with the extremist Red Stick faction whose purpose is to eradicate the Whites from Creek soil. In the midst of battle, Totka is assigned to protect those he is expected to hate--and kill. Life was simpler before his enemy became a beautiful face with a quiet strength and dignity he cannot resist.

Having lived a life plagued with death and loss, Zachariah McGirth is a man on a mission - he'll have his revenge or die trying. Blinded by grief, he can't see his way clear of yet another tragedy. Why has God taken everything from him...or has He?

Their lives molded by the course of history, can these Wounded Spirits learn to rely on God's grace during one of the bloodiest conflicts in the South?




Product Details:

List Price: $12.99
Paperback: 258 pages
Publisher: Vinspire Publishing (November 1, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0981989616
ISBN-13: 978-0981989617

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


McGirth Plantation, Tensaw Settlement

   June 1813

   Adela shifted her body to allow blood flow to her legs. The mossy ground had long grown hard against her tailbone, and the rough tree trunk dug into her back.

   A refreshing breeze blew through the pines lining the northwestern border of her father’s land. It rustled the needles and created a comforting, familiar whistle.

   A small meadow lay vacant before her. On the opposite side, the evening sun cast the last rays through the treetops. Squinting, she thought, for an instant, she saw the form of a man. No, it was just a bush moving with the current of the wind.

   Surely, she had been waiting nigh on two hours. Her family would be worrying. Just north, civil war raged among the Creeks and threatened to involve the vulnerable Americans in the Tensaw and Bigby settlements. Her parents’ constant fear of danger was well placed.

   Soon Mama would call Adela’s father in from the barn and send one of the servants looking for her. Worry was never good for Mama

   Her attacks were rare these days, but she never knew what might set her to wheezing, then coughing.

   Adela’s stomach twittered and flipped. She stood then rubbed her lower back. “Please, hurry, Phillip. Please,” she murmured, not sure she could stay much longer.

   Unheeding, the sun’s beams continued down the length of the trees then dissolved, leaving only their orange and purple reflection in the sky.

   Not wanting to create undue stress on her parents, she gave up waiting and set out toward home. She lifted her skirt to avoid the prickly blackberry bushes, and berated herself for not having thought to bring a lantern. How foolish of me!

   “Adela…Adela…” Her name rode on the breeze.

   Her heart seized, and then leapt as she recognized the voice. Haste sped her back through the underbrush.

   “Phillip! I waited so long.” She panted.. He enveloped her in his work-hardened arms. Phillip was becoming more intimate with her. She wondered if it was too soon.

   “I knew you’d wait.” Resting his hands on her shoulders, he stepped back where she could see him. “I couldn’t get away any sooner. Dixon had a list as long as my arm of things for me to do before I leave tomorrow. He hovered like a hawk to see I got them done.”

   She pulled his hands from her shoulders and held them between her own instead. “You’re here now, and that’s all that matters.”

   “How will I ever last three months without you?”

   “What kind of nonsense is that? You’ll do just fine. The adventure of your life is just around the corner. I hardly think you’ll be pining for boring old Tensaw. You just see Savannah treats you well while you’re busy getting your commission, Second Lieutenant Phillip Bailey.”

   A stray lock of dark blond hair fell over his eye, and feeling bold, Adela brushed it away. He caught her hand and pulled it to his lips, his coffee brown eyes sparkling in the waning daylight. The warmth of his lips on her fingertips sent tingles of excitement rushing through her, but not without a warning.

   I shouldn’t be encouraging him this way. Not while I’m still so unsure... She dropped her eyes, but he mistook her guilt for something else.

   “That’s what I love about you, Adela. You’re all innocence and piety.”

   He cradled the back of her neck with his hand, and her insides fluttered in a dangerous way. She knew she should move away, but she felt drawn to him, like a mouse to a trap.

   Adela cleared her throat, “You speak of love when we’ve only been courting a month. And, I might add, quite unofficially.” His deep affection seemed premature.

   “Maybe, but I’ve known I’d marry you from the day we met.”

   She’d known him since she was just a girl. A grown woman now,ow had she not noticed he cared? She opened her mouth to ask, but he placed a finger on her lips.

   “Are you sure you won’t come with me? It’s not too late. We can marry tomorrow, first thing and—”

   “Marry? Tomorrow?You know I can’t. You haven’t spoken to my father about courting me, much less marriage. And there’s Ellie…did you forget? You know how she adores you.”

   Phillip gave her a placating smile. “She might hurt for a while, but she’ll see reason. She’s not foolish, simply a bit of a romantic…albeit misplaced.”

   Adela chuckled. “Elizabeth, romantic? Determined, more likely. She decided years ago to love you, and it would take a direct message from God to persuade her otherwise.” She propped her hands on her hips, barely noticing the first chirps of the crickets. “Did you know she just rejected an offer of marriage from Mr. Pierce?”

   “The schoolteacher and Ellie? Married?”

   “Well, he would have liked as much.”

   Phillip tipped his square chin and laughed outright.

   The sound brought a smile to Adela’s face, but she chided him nonetheless. “Come now, it was a perfectly decent offer.”

   Phillip wiped his eyes. “But the man is twice her age, and desperate to be married. Have you seen his cabin? Chaos!”

   Adela dismissed his objections with a wave of her hand. “All that aside, I am not prepared to be at odds with my sister. So, she must not find out about us…for the time being, anyway. We’ll address the issue when you return.”

   “She has to find out eventually. Why not now?”Phillip crossed his arms and gave her the back of her shoulder. He’d never been one for patience and at the moment, he reminded Adela of a spoiled child denied a piece of pie.  She chuckled.

   “What are you laughing about?”

   “Just now, you reminded me of Mrs. Haverty’s youngest.”

   His eyes darkened as he took a step closer. His stiff form towered above her. “You’re comparing me to that little monster?”

   Adela sobered at the intensity of his gaze. “It was a silly thought. Please forgive me.”

   He studied her in silence.

   Warning bells clanged in her mind. Just as another apology formed on her tongue, he let out a puff of air and relaxed his stance. “I just want to take care of you, Adela. I want to build a home for you and provide for you, give you beautiful things and walk with you through town on my arm. Let me talk to your father tonight.”

   He could be quite persuasive.Still, she refused to allow him to push her into something for which she wasn’t fully prepared.

   She gave a tentative shake of the head. True to form, her hesitance produced a huff of frustration. “If not now, then when? When will that dear sister of yours ever take the news well?”

   “Why would I tell her something I’m uncertain of myself?”

   He scowled then spoke as if she hadn’t mentioned her ambiguity. “You need to know the moment my feet touch Tensaw soil in August I plan on asking your father for permission to court you properly.” He grasped her chin in his hand and pressed a hard kiss to her lips. “So, you’d best prepare her.”

   She took a step back and smoothed out her skirt.,. “Aren’t you the bold one tonight, Mr. Bailey.”

   He merely grinned and removed the bear claw pendant that always hung around his neck. “Wear this to remember me by,” he said, holding it out.

   “Phillip, it was your grandfathers! I can’t. It’s too important to you.”

   “Of course you can. You’re to be my wife. It means what’s mine is yours. I love you, Adela McGirth, and there’s no one else I’d give it to.” His voice rang with longing as he ran his eyes over the length of her, pausing in all the wrong places.

   She resisted the urge to cross her arms over her chest. At least the dark of the night covered the blush on her cheeks. Never had a man appreciated her body the way Phillip did, and never had one assumed so much. “You’re being a bit presumptuous. Aren’t you?”

   “Not at all. I’m a man who knows what he wants and doesn’t stop until he gets it.” Playfulness tinged in his tone, but Adela heard the truth behind his words. “Take the pendant. If it helps, see it as a gift from a friend. Not as a token of betrothal.”

   Seen in such a way, what could it hurt?

   She slipped it about her neck then gasped as he pulled her into a fierce kiss. His moist lips moved confidently against hers. Warm hands stroked her back and almost melted her resolve to remain chaste.

   “I love you,” he murmured against her mouth.

   She knew he wanted a similar reply, but she couldn’t give it. The words caught in her throat, as if uncertainty itself held them from escaping.

   She split apart from his searching mouth and sought retreat. “Please, be careful in Savannah,” she managed. “I have to go.”  She dropped her arms and ran for home, the claw thumping against her chest.

* * *

   Adela climbed the ladder to the loft careful not to wake her sisters. She hung her dress on a peg and slipped into her nightgown. Phillip’s bear claw thudded against her. She clutched it through her gown as panic seized her. Had she hid it from Mama? So intent on getting home, she hadn’t thought of it until now.

   Her shoulders dropped when she realized Mama would have questioned her about it if she’d seen.

   The wooden timbers of the bed squeaked as Adela climbed in next to Lillian. They had always shared a bed. Even when given the option of each having their own in their more spacious, newly built house, they had both refused, preferring the warmth and closeness the other afforded.

   Although the two were completely opposite one another in every way, they held a special bond. Maybe it was Adela’s quiet dependence on God which supported the more flighty Lillian, or maybe it was Lillian’s carefree spirit which drew Adela to her sister’s side. Perhaps, it was the need for an ally against Ellie’s domineering onslaughts.

   Regardless, with just a year separating them, she and Lillian understood each other, thrived on their friendship.

   Lillian turned over to face her. “Where have you been?” she whispered, her anger barely concealed. “I’ve been worried sick. We all have.”

   “Shh! You’ll wake Ellie.” Adela glanced at Elizabeth but their older sister’s breath remained deep and even.

   “Well?” Lillian hissed.

   “In the woods.”

   “In the woods? That’s all you’re going to say? I hope Mama believed you more than I do.”

   The fearful look on Mama’s face and the way she’d clung to Adela when she’d walked through the door flashed across her mind. She tasted guilt and couldn’t swallow. “Me too. But I didn’t lie, if that’s what you’re getting at.”

   Lillian practically snorted. “That would be something I would do. No, silence would be more your style.” She thumped Adela on the shoulder. “Am I not getting any more details, like where you got that—that—whatever it is hanging around your neck?”

   Adela grasped the pendant. “You saw it?”

   “Of course. When you got undressed, and if you don’t want anyone else to find out about it, you should be more careful. So, out with it. What have you got there?”

   “It’s nothing. I shouldn’t have accepted it.”

   “Nothing? I saw the way you were holding it,” she rasped.

   “Shh! That’s not what I—” Would Lillian understand? “Oh, never mind.”

   “Well, give me all the details. Who is he?”

   “How did you know it was from a man?”

   “Adela, Adela, ever so naive and oblivious. You and I don’t think the same at all. So, tell me already.”

   “If I tell you, you have to promise to keep it to yourself! At least for a while. Promise?”

   “Fine, I promise…just tell me.”

   Adela took a deep breath, and said his name on less than a whisper.

   “What? No! It’s—it’s not as if he has no reason to love you, but you? Lover of all things peaceable and non-confrontational, I never imagined you to be so audacious as to set your bonnet for Ellie’s man!”

   “Shh! See why it’s a secret? No one would understand. Besides, he’s not Ellie’s man. And I’m not even sure I feel anything for him.”

   “You’ve got to be half mad. You do realize Elizabeth will practically disown you?”

   Adela lost the battle against her tears..

   “Come on. Don’t cry. I exaggerated. It won’t be so bad. She’ll forgive you…eventually. She’s never really had a claim to him and will see it in time. But you have to tell her. You can’t keep it from her forever, and if she finds out from someone else, it’ll be worse.”

   “Lilly, I’ve tried a dozen times to tell her, but I just can’t.”

   Adela moaned and Lillian put a comforting hand on her shoulder.

   “It’ll humiliate her, if it doesn’t kill her first,” Adela said. “I should have put an end to it before he left, especially since I’m not sure I even love him. But he’s so…”

   “Handsome? Daring? Everything a woman could want in a man?”

   Adela sighed and fiddled with the claw strung about her neck. “Yes, he’s all that, but there’s something missing…or maybe it’s what he has too much of. A bit too brash, maybe? Too self-confident? He angers easily, and I don’t see much of the Lord in his life.”

   “Is that what’s bothering you? Do yourself a favor and stop focusing on his faults. We all have them.” She propped herself up on an elbow then paused. After a moment of silence, soft snoring from the other side of the room confirmed Ellie still slept.

   Moonlight from the small window washed Lillian’s face in its glow. Their Mama’s full Spanish blood showed itself most in Lillian. Even in the dim light, she was beautiful. “It’s simple,” she said. “You tell Ellie. She’s hurt. When Phillip proposes, you accept, and in time, Ellie recovers.”

   Lillian tugged the pendant from Adela’s grasp. “This was his grandfather’s. I take it Phillip loves you.”

   “He claims he does.”

   “And you saw him tonight to tell him goodbye?”

   Adela bobbed her head.

   “Your secret is safe with me, but my advice is sooner is always better than later.”

   “I know. I know. I’m such a coward.”

   “Hardly.” Lillian patted her hand.

   It felt awkward to be the one consoled. The tables were usually turned.

   .

   “I didn’t plan for it to happen and now…I’m risking Ellie disowning me for a man.”

   “That’s the most ridiculous thing I’ve heard yet. Ellie isn’t that scary. Now why don’t you get some sleep, and we’ll talk about how to handle it tomorrow. I assume there will be a wedding when he returns. You can’t prepare for a home of your own and still keep it a secret. We’ll think of something.”

   “Thanks, Lilly. Love you,” she said with a peck to her sister’s cheek.

   Lillian flipped over,. Much later, her mind exhausted, she relaxed and followed her sister in sleep.

* * *

   Kossati Village, Upper Creek Nation

   The cabin door creaked as it opened. Nokos stepped inside careful not to wake the children. He left the door ajar allowing the moonlight to guide his steps. Its soft glow illuminated his little ones piled like counting sticks on the bearskin mat. Four sets of arms and legs were sprawled in every direction.

   He brushed a kiss onto each warm forehead. The youngest stirred, flipped to his back, and wiped drool from his cheek.

   He had missed them, but the reason for his early return lay in the bed on the far side of the room.

   Having removed his weapons, he stretched his aching muscles and crept into bed next to his wife.

   Just before leaving on his hunting trip one week earlier, he had revealed to Singing Grass his intentions to join the warring party. She wasn’t pleased.

   Civil War had raged in the Creek Nation since the 1811 Grand Council. For over a year, he had publically remained neutral, along with Red Eagle.

   Now, he found himself forced to choose sides. With the purpose of protecting their nation and keeping its traditions pure, the Red Sticks were executing those displaying American sympathies.

   If the Long Knives were not stopped, the Muscogee would eventually be lead to starvation or worse…slavery. According to the Red Sticks, every American sympathizer must die.

   Most in Kossati knew Nokos was partial to the Americans. Yes, their droves of cattle encroached on Creek land, and no, the farmers did not ask permission to run their iron plows through Creek soil. All that aside, he had found it difficult to justify fighting them.

   They were powerful and well studied in war. Singing Grass was right…the Red Sticks would eventually be slaughtered.

   But unless he pledged his allegiance to the Red Stick cause and soon, he would find himself taken unawares by a band of warriors.

   Nokos let out his breath in a gust and sank onto the bearskin pallet.

   Singing Grass stretched an arm across his chest, and propped her small pointed chin on his shoulder. “You are home early.” With familiar affection, she traced the lines and circles tattooed on his neck and awakened a hunger within him.

   He sought her lips and kissed her deeply. “I did not mean to wake you. How are you feeling?”

   “Hungry—all the time.” She hammered his chest with her forefinger. “You left the hunt early to ask me if I am well?”

   “It’s no matter. There was no game to hunt.” He tried to keep the frustration from his voice. No need to worry her.

   “Nothing? You caught nothing?”

   “Three rabbits and a squirrel, as if I were just a boy. No one else had done any better when I left. I doubt one more day would have mattered much.” He pulled her closer. “I would rather be home with you than listening to their talk of war, death, and starv—” He cut his words short.

   “You do not have to hide things from me. I’m pregnant--not blind and deaf. I know what is happening.”

   “We’ll be fine.”

   “You’re joining the Red Sticks. I hardly think it is fine. They will kill themselves in vain. Must you?”

   “Yes, I must.” Should he reveal to her Gray Hawk’s warning to be quick in choosing sides? That his name had been whispered among those whose loyalty was in question?

   “The prophets are insane! Surely you have not succumbed to their antics?”

   “Of course not. I’m no fool.”

   The sighting of a star with a fiery tail traveling across the sky a month after Tecumseh’s departure had frenzied the Creeks. It was the “sign”, they said. It was the “arm of fire” Tecumseh had claimed would prove his prophecies were from the Great Spirit. A strongly superstitious people, the sighting had driven the Creeks into the Red Stick faction by the thousands.

   True to his word, Tecumseh had left several prophets to train the Creeks to lead their people in the war dances. In most every village, the rhythms and tunes became familiar. With devotion, men and women believed the tales told by new prophets.

   “Look what madness has overcome our people,” Singing Grass said. “They are being led to the slaughter! We shame ourselves, and our children will pay. Pushmatahaw is a wise chief. He was right to force Tecumseh from his nation. Because he did, the Choctaw were spared this insanity. If only our chiefs had done the same…”

   “Lower your voice,” Nokos cautioned. “Do you want the children to repeat what you say? We’re already at risk. Careless words could be our destruction.”

   She sat up, and her single braid slipped from her shoulder and landed on his chest with a soft thud. “What do you mean we are already at risk?”

   “My past will not be forgiven. I must clearly oppose the Americans.”

   “And what of your past? Will you pretend it does not exist? Will you spit in the faces of those who love you?”

   “Red Eagle has joined the war party,” Nokos said, preferring to ignore her difficult questions.

   “You should go to Big Warrior, join his White ranks in Tuckabatchee. I hear all who desire peace with the Americans are flocking to his protection.”

   “I agree with Big Warrior, but sooner or later, Tuckabatchee will be under siege and his White warriors will be forced to surrender to the Red Sticks. I either submit now or later.” Nokos shook his head. “No. No, I will do as I vowed and follow Red Eagle. He is a clever warrior, and will lead us well.”

   The moment Nokos heard the half-Scottish, half-Creek chief had joined the Red Sticks, he knew what he must do. “If Red Eagle, as influential and powerful as he is, has been forced at the threat of his family’s life to join the Red Sticks, how will I avoid it?”

   With his gaze, he caressed the mother of his children. She was so vulnerable. And the little ones. Who would protect them when he went away? If he died? At least now, he would not have to fear his own people turning against them. Most found it much easier to wish their enemy’s demise…not so with Nokos.

   She brought his attention back to her by running her warm hand down his cheek. “Wipe the worry from your face, husband,” she said, resolve in her voice. She sniffed once then swallowed. “All will be well. Do what you must.” She dropped next to him and clung to his chest, her hair tickling the underside of his chin.

   He hadn’t realized how much her approval meant to him until he obtained it. Resting a hand on the slight bulge of her belly, he prayed to whatever god would listen that this dear woman be spared the sufferings and hardships which were the sisters of war.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

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Is a little respect too much to ask at a parent’s funeral?
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Clay finds Destiny beautiful, charming...and intelligent. So why is she stubbornly determined to open a Christian dating service? Clay has little respect for such a frivolous profession, and doesn’t think the small, conservative town of Castle Creek will welcome such a progressive business. But when Destiny is threatened by an anonymous caller who deeply resents her and what she does for a living, Clay makes it his business to keep the saucy redhead out of harm’s way.
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Monday, January 17, 2011

Deleted Scenes--Nokose's Nightmare

Time for another deleted scene! This was again is Nokos' point of view. In the final version of the book, Totka wakes Nokose from a nightmare. When I changed Nokose's POV to Totka's, the dream, logically, had to go.

Although Totka is my man (just love that guy), Nokose is dear to my heart too. After all, he was my hero for years. So, I'm delighted to share a bit of him with you through some of these deleted scenes.

Below is an image of the Creek Confederacy and the land cessions over the years. As you can see, the Creek War was costly to them.


Nokose’s Nightmare

Kossati Village
The ground dampened Nokose’ bare feet. The smell of earth was fresh in his nostrils. Thick green foliage surrounded him, concealed him. His heart beat a wild rhythm in his ears as panic took hold.
What should I do? Which way should I run? Like a rabbit ready to bolt, he squatted, hands digging into the ground. Has he seen me?
Nokose tried in vain to steady his pulse, certain the man just a few feet away could hear his ragged breathing. The harder he tried to remain calm, the more anxious he became.
A small, eerie stream of blood spurted from the cracks in the bark of the tree in front of him then oozed down the trunk. A warm splat on his scalp drew his eyes upward.
Blood was everywhere.
Dripping off the leaves of the branches swaying overhead, it increased in volume and ran in streams down the tree, collecting and pooling beneath it. Red blurred Nokose’ vision as the tide picked up momentum and flooded toward him.
Screaming, he backed away from it, slamming his back into a slab of rough wood. Splinters tore into his back as he pushed himself against it in an attempt to flee the crimson sea.
The misplaced sound of rhythmic knocking confused him. The surrounding reds and greens disappeared leaving in its place blinding darkness. The ground beneath his feet transformed from tacky, blood-soaked dirt to the soft buckskin of his sleeping pallet.
Just a dream. The dream—always the same. The one tormenting him since childhood.
Soft rapping broke the stillness. The door. Someone is at the door.
Nokose was on his feet in an instant.